This is a poetry workshop community. We are not a forum for members to discuss suicide.
While many poets may post poems that are depressing in nature and maybe even a bit suicidal in thought, members should stay on the topic of the poem itself and critique it properly.

If you or if someone you know has depression or feelings of suicide we recommend you go to http://befrienders.org and find a hotline in your country and talk to someone who will listen and can help.