Never have my eyes
Seen so much sadness.
Never have these eyes
Seen so deeply into
An enigma of finesse.

Your bones are of silver,
Destructive yet divine.
Your strength from a father,
Your safety aligned.
Your blood is of iron,
The veins are now rusted.
But your heart is still running,
With love now entrusted.

An infant of ignorance,
A child of sorrow.
The young man of dreams,
Your hopes for tomorrow.
A meeting of chance, the southside and diner
Such an innocent way,
For love to acquire.

But now the leaves have gone missing,
The trees, filled with death
Have blocked out the sunshine,
And pierced the pearls chest.
The young man of dreams
With the cracked pearl in heart,
Looks into the mountain
And screams in the dark.

But the fire never fades, and the heart, still pumping
Flows fast and determined,
To keep them from crumpling.
The pearl cries softly, trapped in her mind.
But strong hands protect her
And kind words breathe, “time”.

The white snowfall stops twice,
The sweet spring sings again,
And again.
The long summer rains for two.
But only once does the autumn wind,
Bring October to its end.

A young man of dreams,
With the pearl in his hands,
An inevitable season,
With freedoms demand.
Together, finale,
The pearl is released.
And over the mountain they kiss,
Forever in peace.

Hi FC

I've been waiting for the moderator of this section to descend upon you, but he seems to be strangely absent.

If you're wondering why your two poems haven't gotten a lot of feedback, it's probably due to the fact that you posted them with complete lack of regard for forum rules. Basically, in Advanced you're required to post two detailed critiques of others work before posting your own. Not just "I like this", but a critique showing that you possess understanding of poetic principles. The second, is to not post a second poem until the first has received some feedback, and no more often than once a day.

I hope that you will read the rules, and become a participating member of this form by offering your critiques of other poets. This forum is a cooperative venture---intended to help all of us improve.

Thanks.

Cory